Robin's NIMH FanFiction Archive - Comments

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment Chapter 12

Befor — Sat, 05 May 2012 09:37:27 -0700

Nice. Bit exposition-heavy, but I liked it. Although I'm wondering if well ever get back to Verilla.

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment Chapter 11

BrendanMouse — Mon, 09 Apr 2012 14:30:06 -0700

Loving this so far! :)

I'm really impressed at how you're using Brendan so far in your story (and also somewhat flattered, lol)...I think it's super cool :D I wish I'd thought of some of your ideas for him!

Carry on my friend, carry on! :D

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment Chapter 11

BrendanMouse — Mon, 09 Apr 2012 14:28:10 -0700

Loving this so far! :D

Am really impressed on how you're using Brendan in your story...it's super cool. Look forward to reading more when you get around to it! :)

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment Chapter 11

Befor — Mon, 05 Mar 2012 07:22:04 -0800

Good, good, good, keep it up!

Although I'm wondering if we'll ever get back to Verilla and Thorn Valley at some point.

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment Chapter 7

MB — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 09:22:33 -0800

I'm liking where this story is going. Another thing that would make this story awsome is if Jonathan brisby was alive.

Re: Chapter 8 - Preparing for the Search

MB — Tue, 17 Jan 2012 15:30:58 -0800

Hey David Leemhuis I have a question. I really like your story so I wanted to know if there is going to be a sequal.

Re: Let's see if anyone responds...

MB — Tue, 17 Jan 2012 07:38:42 -0800

Hi.

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment

MB — Tue, 17 Jan 2012 07:38:12 -0800

I agree with you there this story is awsome. I was so drawn into this story I wonder if johnathan brisby will be alive in this story that would be cool. I always liked the mouse johnathan brisby even if there was little known about him. Don't you.

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment Chapter 7

MB — Tue, 17 Jan 2012 07:34:12 -0800

Cool story looking forward to more soon.

Re: Let's see if anyone responds...

MB — Mon, 16 Jan 2012 16:08:28 -0800

Hi their how you doing?

Re: Epilogue

MB — Mon, 16 Jan 2012 16:06:29 -0800

I like it hope their will be a sequal. See ya later...Bye for now.

Re: NIMH: The Final Experiment

Befor — Thu, 01 Dec 2011 11:35:52 -0800

When I saw this story was being continued, I literally heard the Hallelujah chorus. This is shaping up to be an epic story. Please continue and finish this excellent story. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Re: NIMH: The Unauthorized Sequel

X.SableQueanVilaya.X — Tue, 29 Nov 2011 11:33:32 -0800

Very nice! Much better than the other sequel :k

Re: Submission Info & Disclaimer

X.SableQueanVilaya.X — Tue, 29 Nov 2011 11:31:45 -0800

Ok thanks for the advice thingy here...lol XD

Re: Recent Readings: Out of Range

Hera Ledro — Sat, 20 Aug 2011 13:32:34 -0700

Oh dear, I think I may have misphrased. Something I meant to say was that, while this story is a gem among fan-fictions, it is not necessarily novel quality. It's excellent for a fan-fiction, but I think that it needs another revision or two before it is the same quality as what you would get from a novel.