Issue Three: The Awful Truth
PREVIOUSLY:
For Justin Wilson, the Chief Administrator of the new Thorn Valley colony New Valley, the unthinkable has happened.
There seems to be either an alarm level of ineptitude among his workers or some unknown party is intentional sabotaging their efforts!
Could this have anything to do with the mysterious strange who keeps hounding the Brisbys?
If so, what does this strange rat expect to gain?
ISSUE #3: THE AWFUL TRUTH!
[Once outside, MRS. BRISBY looks around and has come some distance away from JUSTINs office tent when she sees JEREMY, who, in turn, sees her, comes in for a landing and crashes into the foliage of a tree, promptly falling to the ground and landing in a thick thorn bush. He extricates himself, groaning and moaning from the pain of thorn pricks as MRS. BRISBY dashes up to him.]
MRS. BRISBY:
Oh, my goodness, Jeremy! Are you okay!?
JEREMY:
As soon <ouch> as I get <yeoch> these <oof> thorns <ow> out of me!
MRS. BRISBY:
Oh, those look painful.
JEREMY:
Not as much as your thorn-bundle, Mrs. B.
MRS. BRISBY:
Thorn-bundle ?
JEREMY:
:{pulling out Mrs. Brisbys bundle}:
Yeah, this thing! Got stuck on the back of of my tie during the chase with that vulture! Been sticking me all the way back!
[MRS. BRISBY stares in horror at it, then snatches it from JEREMY and says]:
MRS. BRISBY:
Uh, I have to stay for a little while longer, Jeremy. Can you come back again later?
JEREMY:
Why, sure, Mrs. Briz, but whats the
[Before he can finish his sentence, MRS. BRISBY bolts back the way she came, back in the direction of JUSTINs office tent.]
[As she runs thru the area, concealed from her site amidst the shrouded bushes, a dark, shadowly, and sinister figure crouches, watching her go past with glowing yellow eyes that narrow into cruel slits as the stranger watches her. The shadow gets up to slowly and secretly follows MRS. BRISBY at a discreet distance and remains unnotice by MRS. BRISBY.]
[MRS. BRISBY reaches JUSTINs office and ducks right in.]
JUSTIN:
:{surprised}:
Mrs. Brisby! Back so soon ?
MRS. BRISBY:
I never left. I didnt get a chance because I just remembered. There was something else I have to tell you.
JUSTIN:
There was ? What ?
MRS. BRISBY:
<Sigh> Justin, I have something to show you. And I hope to God it doesnt mean what I think it does.
[JUSTIN watches with an expression of partially concealed dread as MRS. BRISBY comes to his desk, sets down her bundle and slowly opens it to reveal the shread of black cloth with its pinkish-red and purple lining and its gold button. And the mysterious intruders knife.]
[At the sight of these objects, JUSTIN leaps to his feet, staring down at the things on his desk. He is suddenly trembling violently. He has turned so pale he is as white as a sheet and looks ill with sudden fright.]
JUSTIN:
Oh Oh, my God. I I think I recognize these. I know what they are.
Wh-where did you get these things?
MRS. BRISBY:
Remember, I told you I was being harrassed by the stranger I told you about?
He attacked me in my yard some weeks back. My neightbor drove him off. She made him drop the blade and torn the cloth from his clothes. Justin, Ive only seen something like that cloth on only one person before. Oh, please, Justin, tell me Im wrong!
JUSTIN:
:{sitting back down}:
I wish I could I really do. But you arent. Weve been in denial about this whole thing, havent we? The both of us. But no, Im afraid its time that we faced the truth and stop kidding ourselves isnt it?
MRS. BRISBY:
<Gasp> No ! Oh, God! You You mean, its true !?
JUSTIN:
Sit down, my friend. I have something I have to tell you, too. No one believed me when I first told them this. They convinced me I was hallucinating and by God,
I wanted to believe that I had dreamed it all up. But in light of the evidence
how can we continue to deny what happened to me that night right after your house was moved.
MRS. BRISBY:
Wha What happened ?
JUSTIN:
<Sigh> It was right after your house was moved, Mrs. Brisby. I I dont know why I felt like I did at the time, but I felt like something was wrong. Wed just finished camoflaging your house while Mr. Ages was seeing you and the children to bed. We We couldnt find a couple of the, uh, the bodies
We had Nicodemus, but we couldnt find Sullivan or
MRS. BRISBY:
Oh, no
JUSTIN:
Everyone thought that the bodies must have sunk in the mud just like your house almost did. We looked for them, but all we could find was Sullivans knife. We never found any hint of him at all no where. But no one knows how Sullivans knife came out of his back.
MRS. BRISBY:
Oh, dear God
JUSTIN:
Well, as you can imagine, none of that sat too well with me. When everyone else stopped looking, I continued. I took my search further afield than everyone else did, which I knew was stupid. He was dead, right? Its not like a dead body can just get up and walk away, right? The body must have sunk, just like everyone thought, right? Thats what my rational mind said but not my instincts. I guess you could say my hackles were up. Which is why I took my sword. By all rights, I shouldnt have needed it but, dear God I did!
MRS. BRISBY:
Go on
[As JUSTIN describes what happened next, the scene fades into the following flashback]:
[JUSTIN, his sword in hand and apparently very tired from the nights exertions, has taken his search some distance from the main ground at the worksite, on the cloudy, stormy night of the BRISBY house move. He is now in a grassy area and close to the rock MRS. BRISBY uses to hide from the hawk. As JUSTIN walks along slowly from weariness, his head down, he hears the snap of a twig getting stepped on and looks up]:
[A figure about his size moves along the path up ahead of him, moving away from him.]
[Because it is so dark, JUSTIN squints, trying to make out what appears to be another rat.]
[At that moment, with a deafening crack of thunder, a brilliant claw of lightning lights up the area just as the other rat turns for a backwards glance.]
[The brief light makes identification now possible and JUSTIN gasps in horror as he recognizes the other rat.]
[It is JENNER he still lives!]
JENNER:
:{whispered hiss}:
Wilson!
[Glaring at JUSTIN, JENNER draws his recovered sword and slowly advances ]
[ as does JUSTIN.]
[They both end their advance on the slab of rock, slowly circling each other and quite surprisingly, JENNER does not seem quite as injured as one might have thought somehow.]
JUSTIN:
Where do you think youre going!? Youre not getting away that easy!
Youre finished now, you traitor!
JENNER:
What makes you think I was trying to get away? It is you who shall not escape this time!
[At this, JUSTIN charges viciously and for the second time that night, their duel is re-hashed.]
[As the duelists exchange bone-jarring, limb-numbing blows, the stone slab they fight no wobbles and tilts beneath their weight.]
[JUSTIN nearly falls, but manages to stay on his feet ]
[ but JENNER looses his balance and falls. Landing, he rolls out of the way of JUSTINs down-swinging blade and rolls right onto his feet. As he does so, he snatches up a rock and flings it at JUSTIN with all the force that his hate can give.]
[The blow catches JUSTIN right in the forehead, knocking him down. As he lands, the already stunned hero hits the back of his head on the ground, knocking him semi-unconscious.]
[This part of the flashback ends and]:
JUSTIN:
and even tho I was mostly knocked out, I could just barely make out him
standing over me again, a moment later, getting ready to do what Sullivan stopped him from doing before. I dont mind telling you, I was scared to death, but I couldnt move I was too dazed even to sit up, let alone get up! I could only lay there, begging him not to do it (No! No! God, please!) and doing what I could to try to shield myself, even tho I knew it was futile. God, I couldnt even look then! Even tho no one believed
what I had to say when they found me, it was a major miracle that I didnt die right then! Because Im sure I would have!
MRS. BRISBY:
:{shaking her head}:
Oh Oh, dear God! What happened next!? How did you escape!?
JUSTIN:
Well, it seems that someone was coming, looking for me, I suppose.
Jenner ran off and the next thing I knew, Arnold and Willis ran up to me.
I could barely understand a word they said, either to me or each other,
because my head was pounding and my ears were ringing yknow, when I hit my head during my fall. Well, Willis took off and Arnold held me. Took care of me. Hes always been so timid, I was the one who took care of him, before NIMH, before we came to the rosebush, then here where we hoped to have such a contained, isolated existance that he wouldnt need my constant protection. He wouldve been eaten alive in the old days if I hadnt been there to take care of him. And now, here he was, taking care of me!
MRS. BRISBY:
So, Arnold and Willis drove Jenner off and saved your life,
even tho they didnt didnt know it yet and didnt even believe it when you told them?
JUSTIN:
Yeah. God knows, I I tried to tell Arnold, while we were waiting for help. But I was delirious. Im sure I didnt even make any sense. I guess I was easy to see why they thought it wasnt true. I was delirious from a bad head injury. I couldve been imagining anything and sworn to God it was real. They convinced me I was dreaming and I accepted it, because it made more sense and it was easier to accept that than to accept the fact that the guy who tried to kill me twice that night is still alive!
MRS. BRISBY:
Oh, dear God, Justin !
JUSTIN:
Yeah. And they still wouldnt believe me, even after I was healed and my head was clear enough to know real from fantasy or so they made me doubt.
MRS. BRISBY:
Healed ? What do you mean? You cant mean you recovered that quickly from a head injury. I thought it was a bad one.
JUSTIN:
:{visuals shown with this dialogue block}:
Oh, you dont know, do you? You remember, Aurora was Nicodemuss apprentice, as well as his care-giver. He was her teacher. Said she had great gifts worthy of his training. Her first talent has made itself known. Shes a psychic healer! I came to fully and found her kneeling over me, with her paws on my head and they were glowing, glowing with a white-gold light! Took the pain and ringing away and made the bleeding stop! Ages checked me right after and said I was fine. His leg was also healed, by the way. Willis wanted him when he went for help, but Ages complained that he couldnt walk fast enough. Thats when Aurora said she could help and healed his leg even his cast was desolved.
Willis brought her to me at once instead, but Ages and a lot of the other came, too to see what was going on. And to think, of all of them, no one believe me. And, eventually, they had me so convinced that I was hallucinating that night, that I didnt believe me anymore either! But its true! Jenner is still alive and somewhere at large!
MRS. BRISBY:
<Gasp> And hes been harrassing me! What do you think he wants!?
JUSTIN:
Honestly? Id say, the Amulet! He couldnt have see you give it to me. He must think that you still have it!
MRS. BRISBY:
Why, thats right! When he attacked me, he demanded the Stone or else!
JUSTIN:
:{drained}:
It figures. I shouldve known hed find a way to make it thru. He seems to get the short end of things, then the next thing we know Well, you know what Im getting at. That bastard must have a goddamned charmed life or something!
MRS. BRISBY:
:{suddenly}:
<Gasp> My children! Theyre home all alone! If he thinks I have the Stone
and goes there to look for it Oh, no! What if he finds them!?
JUSTIN:
This is really getting serious. Our Plan has failed. NIMH is planning an attack.
Your children may be in danger. And its all that treacherous bastards fault! Him and he shouldnt even be alive! Look, Mrs. Brisby, if you think hes gonna be a threat to your children, I advise you get home and collect your children. Come back here with themb your home isnt safe not with Jenner on the loose! You and your family can be better protected here, by all of us. So if
MRS. BRISBY:
Yes! Yes, I must
[Suddenly, she sees a large shadow thru the tent wall and whoever it is, it appears to be armed with a spear of some kind.]
MRS. BRISBY:
<Gasp> Justin, look out behind you!
[JUSTIN jumps clear as the figure lunges right thru the tent wall and the crudely widdled wooden spear goes right thru the back of JUSTINs chair where he had been just seconds before!]
[As MRS. BRISBY dives for cover, the tent wall tears free and falls on JUSTIN, so neither see their attacker. By the time JUSTIN gets out, the intruder is gone.]
JUSTIN:
Mrs. Brisby, are you alright?
MRS. BRISBY:
Yes, I think so. Im fine. You?
[JUSTIN holds up the collapsed tent curtain ]
JUSTIN:
Uh, I Ill get back to you on that.
[ and observes the damage done by the spear: a long, wicked gash big enough to pass thru. In fact, he is looking at MRS. BRISBY right thru that huge gash, looking ill-at-ease.]
JUSTIN:
<Gulp> Oh, sh
MRS. BRISBY:
Oh, well. I think the children, at least, are safe. We know where he is now.
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Justin called out the guard at once. Tho he declined to say just who he thought it was, for some strange reason (where the guard was concerned), he made it clear that there was an intruder in New Valley Colony, who had to be captured at all costs. Unfortunately, the hunt for the intruder was unsuccessful; whoever it was was just too clever and cunning for Justins foot soldiers.
Luckily, anticipating that she might not get home for some days, Mrs. Brisby sent Jeremy back with a message for the children to get Auntie Shrew to watch them in their mothers absense.
Jeremy, finding no one home at the Brisby house, returned to Thorn Valley, but he was unable to find the childrens mother in fact, he was unable to find anyone; other problems made themselves priority for anyone that Jeremy might have otherwise found, for later that day, NIMH arrived and it was a mad scramble to get everyone hidden before the humans saw anything.
The rats took as much food and water as they could and hid in the caves they work preparing to modify into living space of luxuriant as anything they had in the rosebush. They hid successfully for three days before the humans gave the whole hunt up as a wild goose chase. And Thorn Valley was left in peace once more.
Or maybe not as much peace as they themselves would have thought, for in the interim, other problems just got worse
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[JUSTIN, ARNOLD and MRS. BRISBY enter the office tent and sit down, but before they can really get situated, the twins father JACKSON enters and motions ARNOLD to come outside, where the two of them quietly talk. And back inside]:
JUSTIN:
Its good to be back on track, isnt it, Mrs. Brisby?
MRS. BRISBY:
It certainly is. We really had a time, playing tag with the humans, didnt we? But for all the running, it was worth it to see them get discouraged and finally leave.
JUSTIN:
To be sure. NIMH is out of our hair and the Plan is back on track. Its been nice and quiet lately enough to get all our tents back up and my wall repaired.
[He motions to the wall behind him it has been pinned back into place and the gash on it sewn up.]
[MRS. BRISBY does not look convinced at this, tho.]
MRS. BRISBY:
It has been quiet, hasnt it? Theres still the matter of him. Justin, I Im worried.
JUSTIN:
<Sigh> Yes. I know. So am I. No one has to tell me that my tails on the line, so long as hes out there. I can just imagine what hed probably like to do to me. <Shudder> Weve got to find out
[Suddenly, ARNOLD bursts into the office]:
ARNOLD:
Justin, we gotta talk now!
JUSTIN:
Cant it wait? Were kinda
ARNOLD:
No, it cant!
JUSTIN:
Dammit, Arnold! Whats so damned inportant this time that it cant wait? Cant you see were busy?
ARNOLD:
Well, if youd give me a chance its very important! I just received confirmation! Its sabotage, all right! And the cave digging equipment was just destroyed, too
so we cant even mine our winter shelters! And its intensional there can be do doubt! Someone wants us all to starve! And worse, come the winter weather! Why, ... we well freeze!
[JUSTIN and MRS. BRISBY look at each other.]
MRS. BRISBY:
:{dryly}:
I can bet we both know what each other is thinking right now, Justin.
JUSTIN:
:{at first, low and distant; then loud and angry}:
Yes. Yes, you can. Because youre right. That son-of-a-bitch!
[ARNOLD and MRS. BRISBY jump in alarm at this sudden, uncharacteristic show of hostility.]
ARNOLD:
:{puzzled and alarmed}:
Huh? Whore you talking about?
JUSTIN:
Hes really pushing me to the limit not that he doesnt already! Well, he wont get away with anything this time I swear it!
ARNOLD:
But who!? Who are you
JUSTIN:
Im not crazy, Arn! I wasnt dreaming that night! He
[Suddenly, TIMOTHY dashes in ]
TIMOTHY:
Mama! Mama!
[ and before his mother knows it, he leaps into her arms.]
TIMOTHY:
Im so glad I found you! Ive been looking for days!
MRS. BRISBY:
:{flabbergasted}:
Timmy! How What Why I thought I told you Timothy, what are you doing here!?
TIMOTHY:
Mama, please! Something awfuls happened! The others theyre gone! Auntie Shrew and I couldnt stop him
MRS. BRISBY:
Him!? Oh Oh, no! Justin
JUSTIN:
Who did this!?
TIMOTHY:
It it was a rat! A big grey rat! Bigger than you, Chief Justin! I didnt see who it was but when I came out, he was leaving with a big sack on his back! And the sack was moving! Martin and the girls they mustve been in it! The big rat he got away on the back of a big hawk! I tried to catch him, but I couldnt. I lost him. So, I came here to find you, Mama cause I knew this is where youd probably be!
MRS. BRISBY:
:{weeping}:
Oh Oh, God! My children! My children! Hell <Choke>
JUSTIN:
Oh, hey! Hey, Mrs. Brisby! Dont cry! Itll be alright! Well save them. Damn that bastard! Im really gonna get im this time!
ARNOLD:
Justin, wha
JUSTIN:
Cmon, Arn! We gotta go get a search party together!
[With JUSTIN leading, they all rush out.]
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[Meanwhile, unaware of the rising dilemma, WILLIS and ISABELLA sit together by a stream below an old oak.]
[They are stretched out on a thin blanket on the grass, besides a half-emptied picnic basket.]
[WILLIS, laying on his side with his head propped up on one paw, listens attentively as ISABELLA speaks, her mood and tone dismal]:
ISABELLA:
... and then, ... he just told me to go do something nice. Barely even looked at me.
<Sigh> Oh, Willis, ... when will he notice me?
WILLIS:
Justins a leader now, Izzy.
[ISABELLA looks contemptuous at this, but WILLIS goes on, obliviously]:
WILLIS:
Our leader. Hes got a lot of responsibilities now. He doesnt have time for romance.
[He pauses, watching her, then goes on, sitting up]:
WILLIS:
:{plaintively}:
I ... really do wish youd reconsider. He hasnt got time for you, ... but but I do.
And Im much closer to your age than he is. Why, he was already a grown-up when we were both born, back when Rose Colony was started. He really is too old for you. There are, I know, a number of the other young females who are much closer to his age that hed be more than likely to take up with. You arent the only available girl in the colony, yknow
ISABELLA:
:{almost arrogantly; indignant}:
I am almost of age now ... and Ill bet that Im just as pretty as any of the other girls!
Besides, he almost took up with a girl his own age once my own sister Beatrice. And that didnt work out. Maybe older girls arent for him! Yere just jealous cause hes so handsome n sexy n attractive n nice even if he doesnt realize that hes all that ... and cause Im interested in him instead of ye! He ... Oh, but why am I tellin ye this?
WILLIS:
Bella, I
ISABELLA:
Ye dont understand, do ye?
WILLIS:
Well, ... I I just hate to see you ... tormenting yourself like this ... over someone youll never get to have. Why, everyone knows you dont stand a chance on getting him to
[ISABELLA turns on him at this ]
[ making WILLIS jump in alarm and break off, taken aback by ISABELLAs seeming hostility.]
ISABELLA:
Ooooo, how could ye!? Here ye know how I feel about him ... and how hard it is for me tget him ... and now ye go n say And ... And how dye know I cin never have im? Has e told ye he wont have me? How do ye know!? How cin ye say I I dont stand ah chance!?
[Angry and resentful, she turns from him; after a long, awkward pause]:
WILLIS:
Please reconsider, Izzy. Justin has no time for you. But ... I ... I do. I ... I like you, Izzy. I I always have. If ... If you ... youd ... only give me a chance, ... even half of one. Izzy, ... please. If ... youd only ... just have me, ... at least ... for a day, ... just a single day, ... I I promise that I
ISABELLA:
Willis, ... I ... I dont love ye. Yere ah good friend. I do like ye alright, ... but as a friend. I dont love ye. I ... I want Justin. I want him to love me especially after what happened.
WILLIS:
You mean, ... with what Jenner did ?
ISABELLA:
Yes! Please dont! Just dont say any more! I dont know why I confided in yah, ... why I even bothered! I shoulda jus kept it ... between me n Aurora!
Willis, please! I just want Justin. I want him to love me. Yere just not the same. It isnt ... right ... for me. Please. Not ye, ... not now ...
[For a long moment, there is silence as ISABELLA becomes oblivious to WILLISs presence, her head pouted, eyes closed; she seems to be struggling with emotions.]
WILLIS:
... Izzy.
[He pauses, touching her shoulder.]
WILLIS:
Look at me. Please?
[ISABELLA pulls away, shaking her head, her voice tearful]:
ISABELLA:
No, Will. No. Thats ... my final word, I
[WILLIS pulls away, taken aback, looking crossed]:
WILLIS:
Bella, ... for goodness sake, what do you want me to do!?
[ISABELLA turns to stare at him with angry, glistening eyes]:
ISABELLA:
Seriously?
[He looks at her questioningly as she goes on, crossed and cold]:
ISABELLA:
I want ye ... to go away. Go away n just leave me alone!
WILLIS:
Izzy!
[He catches her angry glance]:
WILLIS:
I mean, Bella! No!
[ISABELLA stares, seemingly at nothing at all. When she speaks, it is as if in a trance]:
ISABELLA:
Im not mad at ye, Will. I know what yere thinking right now, ... that thats what yere worry about. I do like ye as a friend. I ... I just dont love ye. <Sigh> I just wanna be alone, just for a little while. Please, Will.
WILLIS:
... <Sigh> Alright, alright. I Ill go away for a while and explore or something. Ill come back inna little while. Uhm, ... I ... know its probably a total loss, but, uhh, ... I, uhh, ... I hope I hope you liked the picnic.
ISABELLA:
Uhm, thank ye. Yes, it was ... lovely. Ah, look, Will, I I think ... Im gonna start back now. Okay? So ... if Im gone when ye get back, dont worry Ill clean up.
WILLIS:
Uh, ... uh, sure ...
[Looking uncertain, he turns away, starting off, glancing back to see ISABELLA stand up and start, rather slowly, to fold up the blanket.]
[ISABELLA, for her part, looks forlorn, a longing expression on her tear-moist face.]
[Sighing, WILLIS starts off as ISABELLA pauses to watch him, then starts back, picnic basket on one arm, blanket on the other, going slowly, oblivious to the beautiful scenery around her.]
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[Meanwhile, WILLIS walks slowly along the wooded path with his paws behind him, clasped. His head is down and his expression is that of semi-thought, a mixed mood.]
[Suddenly, he hears the snap of a branch being stepped on, accompanied by the rustling of undergrowth.]
[Abruptly, he stops, staring ahead. Ears pricked, he sniffs the air in deep uncertainty. He proceeds slowly, thinking]:
WILLIS:
(Its ... another rat. A male, by the smell. One of ours, ... I believe. How strange, I almost recognize that scent, but I dont remember who. I wonder that hes doing way up here and so far from the camp? Another picnicker maybe? Others smells, too. Mice, it smells like ... more than one. And young ones, too a little male ... and a couple of little mouse-maids, I think. I I wonder why the scents are all mixed up together, tho? Our kind rarely have truck with mice, ... let alone children and NIMH-altered rats like us dont have any inter-action with mice ... or any other kinda beast, for that matter not at all. That is, however, with the exception of the Brisby family, Miss Aurora, Gregory, and Mr. Ages. But the Brisbys didnt come with us and the others are down in camp. So what ... ?)
[Creeping ahead quickly, but silently, he comes thru the thick undergrowth to the neighboring path, looking around.]
[Not far up this path, the undergrowth is still moving, but becoming still again, becoming motionless.]
[Nervously, WILLIS creeps forward silently in this direction, cautiously sniffing and listening. He notes that there are foot tracks on the ground.]
WILLIS:
(Rat tracks. A lot of em; all the same. Whoever it is has been coming thru here a lot. And ... theres that mouse smell again. It smells like theyre all together. And not far from here, either.)
[Curious, but cautious, WILLIS follows the rat tracks and the scents, thinking]:
WILLIS:
(Strange that there are no mouse tracks just the rat. If the mice and the rat are so associated, if I judge by their scents, then where are their tracks? Youd think that they would leave tracks, too that is, assuming that they came willingly. Maybe theyre injured ... and couldnt walk. But then, why didnt he bring them to us if he is one of ours? I think he is the smell ... certainly seems like ours. And if he wasnt, he still couldve let us know. But a non-NIMH rat doing this; now that, I just cant see. But that scent its one of us, Im sure.)
[He comes to a rotten log, half-buried in the dirt, with much undergrowth all around it and growing out of it, some of it trailers of moss.]
WILLIS:
(The scent seems to indicate hes been staying in there with those mice.
But why here ... and not in camp?)
[He proceeds, pausing in the entrance while his nose wrinkles.]
WILLIS:
(Phwew! It smells like something died in h !? Yikes!)
[He sees, a slight ways into the dark, the pathetic remains of some poor creature, all festooned with webs ... and there are also bones scattered everywhere as well as webs.]
[WILLIS tries to calm down his jangling nerves]:
WILLIS:
(Uhm, ... not to good a house keeper. <Humph!> Ill bet that the owl takes better care of his tree house than whoever it is living in this dump.)
[He proceeds cautiously into the log, still sniffing ... and comes across an opening in the right side of the rotting passage and sees the red-gold flicker ... of firelight coming from inside.]
WILLIS:
:{wryly}:
(Hello! A-Anybody ... h-home?)
[On guard and ready to run at the first sign of trouble, WILLIS proceeds to the door ... and sees the following: a small, crudely widdled wooden bed in one small corner; a table and chair of the same type; a woodbox of also the same type; an almost all-stone fireplace; and a water bottle that is, a large clay jug of water. And hanging from a hook on the wall is a dead bird with a crude, widdled spear thrusted thru its heart, its throat savagely ripped open.]
[WILLIS gasps in horror, paling, a paw at his own throat.]
WILLIS:
(My God! Wh Who in the world ? We We dont eat meat ... like other rats, common rats not if we can help it, ... not if we can grow our own food like we do and spare other creatures from having to be food. Who Who is it ... t-that lives here? Wh-Who is the world would !? Whats that?)
[At that moment, he notices a pit in another corner with a raised edge and also a crude wire grid over it. It is nailed down and has a crude door, wired closed, as well.]
[Frightened tho he is, WILLIS moves towards it.]
WILLIS:
(I I wonder, ... is ... t-this guy ... k-keeping livestock or something? What if ... !? Those mouse smells! God, no! Oh, please, God no! I I know common rats ... sometimes ... eat ... But ... no. Oh, no. Not one of us. It cant be one of us! Please! He cant be eating ... !)
[Slowly, as if fearing what he might find, WILLIS looks into the pit ... and sees three mice. Children. It is MARTIN, TERESA, and CYNTHIA. MARTIN is pacing around while his sisters sit in a corner, huddled together in fear. CYNTHIA is crying soundlessly, her little face burried in her sisters lap, clasping onto the skirt with little fists, and TERESA is trying to comfort her, an arm around the younger girl.]
MARTIN:
Dont worry, girls. Ill thinka sumthin before he gets back. I Ill get us outta here. I wont let im hurt either of y
TERESA:
But Martin, ... h-he
WILLIS:
Hello down there, children! Hey! Little ones, why are you like this, in this cage? Who did this to you?
[CYNTHIA screams and cries loudly now, cowering and WILLIS is taken aback, startled by her outburst.]
CYNTHIA:
Mommy! Mommy help us! Help us, Mommy! <Sob>
TERESA:
There, there, Cynnie, dont
[MARTIN picks up a stick and starts swinging it in WILLIS direction]:
MARTIN:
Go on, just try sumthin! I aint scared o ya! You touch us any o us you gonna be big sorry! Now you get outta here!
[WILLIS smiles in amusement at MARTINs bravado.]
WILLIS:
Hey, calmly there, little fella. I aint uh, ... I mean, ... Im not gonna do anything to you.
[MARTIN stares at WILLIS, blinking in bewilderment, then he turns to his sisters.]
MARTIN:
Look, girls, ... its not the same one.
WILLIS:
Yes, thats right. I not ... the same one, whoever did this to you. Who are you little guys and and what are you doing in ... this awful place?
[He looks around in disgust and fear.]
[MARTIN drops his stick.]
MARTIN:
Im Martin. And them twore my sisters Teresa and Cynthia. Are you ... one of the rats, sir one of the good ones?
WILLIS:
"Good ones"? Yes. Yes, ... I am.
MARTIN:
From that NIMH place, ... right?
WILLIS:
Uh, yeah. Yeah, thats right; were from NIMH.
MARTIN:
Then youre one of the ones that helped our mom move our house.
WILLIS:
Moving your house? Your mother, ... you say? Then you guys must be Mrs. Brisbys kids. I thought there was suppose to be four of you. Two girls, I know and two boys, I believe. That right?
TERESA:
Yes, sir.
WILLIS:
Then wheres the other little boy? I hope whoever put you here didnt uh, do anything ... to to him ...
TERESA:
Oh, no, sir! Timothy
CYNTHIA:
Timmy got way.
MARTIN:
Yeah. Our little brother was in our house when we were took.
TERESA:
The big rat couldnt get at him, because Timothy was inside at the time.
WILLIS:
The big ? Who ?
TERESA:
Are you one of Captain Justins guards?
WILLIS:
Chief, hes called Chief now. Chief Administrator, but we all just call him Chief for short. No, Im just an assistant engineer. Apprentice-In-Training to Arthur.
You can call me Willis. Now then, whyre you here in this this stink-hole?
Who did this to you? Whos ... the big rat?
TERESA:
We dont know who he is. We
MARTIN:
All we know is, a big rat took us from the garden ... and brought us here ... on some kinda bird, I think. We were flyin werent we?
[He turns to his sisters.]
MARTIN:
Didnt it feel like we were flyin right?
TERESA:
Yes.
MARTIN:
He brought us here all lumped together in a sack. Boy, if you wanna talk about uncomfortable, try getting around crowded together like that! Then he just dumped us into this pit cage and wired the door shut. Hes so big and ... and mean but ... I wasnt scared!
TERESA:
Martin.
[He glances at her, but does not reply.]
CYNTHIA:
Were, too! Were, too jus like us!
MARTIN:
Well, I ... uh ...
[TERESA turns to WILLIS]:
TERESA:
We tried to get up to open the door, but the sides are way too steep and smooth that we couldnt get a grip.
WILLIS:
Hm, no traction, huh?
MARTIN:
Yeah. Will you open up the door and gets us a rope, ... please?
[WILLIS locates a rope on the floor, tying one end to the wire bars and throwing the other end to the BRISBY children. Then he goes to work on the wire on the door.]
MARTIN:
Thanks. Thanks a lot! I told ya wed get outta here, girls.
TERESA:
I suppose you can take us to your colony? Mother might be there
since shes been coming here a lot lately. She was on her way here when we were taken. She might be here now!
CYNTHIA:
Mommy! Mommy! I want my mommy!
[WILLIS is still at work on the wire.]
WILLIS:
Why, sure. Dont you worry your little blond head there, little missy. Ill see to it that you all get to your "mommy". But now then, why were you taken by this rat anyway?
CYNTHIA:
Cause o the Stone the Stone!
[WILLIS pauses, startled, staring down at Cynthia with foreboding alarm.]
WILLIS:
Stone, ... you say?
TERESA:
He kept talking about a Stone. He said that he would keep us here until he had it. He told us that Mother had it and once she gives it to him, hed let us out. He left just a while ago, to go and find Mother ... and make her give it to him. He said we were his ... his hostages and that the Stone, whatever it is, was the ransom ...
[At this, WILLIS is working frantically on the wire, terrified. Half to himself]:
WILLIS:
Oh, my God! Oh, my God! I I didnt know who it was before, but now now, I do! I ... I gotta get you kids outta here! The Stone. Its the Amulet, it its gotta be the Amulet! And the big rat is ... ! It must be! Who else would want it enough to ? He mustve somehow survived just as Justin said! Oh! Oh, God! Why!? Why didnt we listen to Justin? He was right right all along! If only wed listened! But no and now were not prepared! Oh, God! How can we deal with this!? I I gotta get you outta here!
[The three children glance at each other in confusion.]
MARTIN:
Huh? You know who the big rat is, dont you? Well then, who is that guy, anyway?
WILLIS:
Never mind! No time to explain now, just start climbin! Quickly! Were in danger!
[The children move towards the rope.]
[WILLIS goes on, looking around in fear]:
WILLIS:
Were all in terrible danger, kids! Big trouble if he gets back, terrible trouble and and
TERESA:
We tried to pretend we didnt understand, but then he got so mad and yelled at us for a long time, raving like some kinda loony ...
MARTIN:
Yeah, ... like ... he was blamin us for somethin or other, like it was somehow our fault. Its just like Teresa said the guy, he was actin real crazy, like a loony ... or sumthin.
WILLIS:
That, he is, if its who I think!
TERESA:
And then, he just went away.
[MARTIN adds, fearfully now]:
MARTIN:
Thats not all either. If Mom doesnt give him that Stone, ... h-he said ... he he was gonna ... t-take us a-and and he was g-gonna w-was g-gonna
W-Well, ... h-he made it ... pretty clear, ... h-hes not gonna ... l-let us outta here a-alive ... if ... if
[CYNTHIA squeals, bursting into renewed tears.]
WILLIS:
<Gulp> Oh, God! Oh, my God!
[TERESA looks horrified.]
TERESA:
Martin! Dont say things like that!
MARTIN:
Sorry. But I didnt actually say he was gonna gonna I mean, ... our friend gets the idea. Right?
WILLIS:
I can imagine!
MARTIN:
Besides, Im not saying anything either of us dont already know. We all heard im say what hed like to do with us if he doesnt get this Stone and
[Again, CYNTHIA squeals in horror, crying even harder and TERESA seems to do what little she can for her as they climb.]
TERESA:
:{angry}:
Oh, Im gonna hit you, Martin! Stop it already!
MARTIN:
Okay, okay! Im sorry!
TERESA:
Its okay, Cynthia! Everythings gonna be okay!
[CYNTHIA continues to whimper, but her crying ceases.]
TERESA:
:{to Willis}:
Sir, what is it with that Stone? Is it the one that Mother said she got us out of the mud with? She never told us exactly how she did it, ... but, well, how? How could a little Stone ?
WILLIS:
There! The wires off. Now lets
[There is a noise in the tunnel the web festooned skeleton falls clattering to the ground, the joints breaking apart, the bones skittering everywhere.]
[WILLIS freezes, going on softly]:
WILLIS:
Oh ... Oh, no! Look, kids hide in the shadows. Hes comin back!
[In the pit cage, the children all huddle together in a shadowed corner in a little group, trembling in fear, crying out in alarm.]
WILLIS:
<Shh> Be quiet and stay put. Ill see what I can do to get you out!
[Abruptly, WILLIS turns from the cage pit with its three cowering prisoners.]
[WILLIS looks around frantically.]
[Spotting the dead bird, he rushes up to it and fighting back nausea and disgust, he wrenches the spear free from it in a sudden mess of blood and feathers ... all over the place and on him, making him yip]:
WILLIS:
<Aie!> Oh, ... yuck!
[And in the cage-pit]:
TERESA:
Martin, wha
MARTIN:
<Shh-hhh>
[He drops his tone to a whisper]:
MARTIN:
Well wait until both go if they do. Then
[CYNTHIA suddenly squeals shrilly]:
CYNTHIA:
Quiet!
[Alarmed, the others respond at once (TERESA with a gasp of alarm) as they both grab her and put a paw each over her mouth, their paws overlapping in the process. They look up in fear, trembling, tho CYNTHIA looks indignant at the restraint.]
[Clutching the spear nervously, WILLIS looks over his shoulder, whispering]:
WILLIS:
<Shhhh>, you kids! Please, be
[His head turned, he does not see the other rat enter (and all we see of him is a forepaw, heavily cloaked in shadow) not until the other rat seizes WILLISs spear and in trying to rip it free of WILLISs grip, violently breaks the barb right off.]
WILLIS:
Huh !?
[The pressure on the spear and the sudden movement related to its breaking gets WILLISs attention and he turns to face the other rat, stumbling back in shocked fright, terrified. He backs away fearfully ]
WILLIS:
<Gasp>
[ as JENNER emerges from the shadows, glaring hatefully at WILLIS, his eyes narrowed and teeth bared as he vehemently whips out his sword.]
WILLIS:
(!) Jenner!
[TO BE CONTINUED]